Thesis Statement Draft as of Feb 21st,2011
•I‘d like to make an artifact: urban media lighting, a combination of physical devices such as LED light, Mobile phone and Networked sensors with mobilephone network. (What) The urban media lightingsupports social stability to resolve a problem on modern urban planning theory: lack of attention (of something..) to social capital. (Why) For the place where different type of people come across such as Station, Shopping mall, etc (Where) the users of those places are not aware of each other’s existence. (Who) The urban media lighting system provides shared experiences between them with a combination of physical device and network service situated on site. It gives interaction between members of user. (How) When needs of different user conflicts, interaction (needs more detail. What circumstances and /or situation->what) happens. (When)
- What: Social Capital is a buzz word
- What: ‘Artifact: is a weak noun.
- Where: You’ll need at least 3 examples and (an) elaboration
- Who: 誰？姿が見えない。記述が浅いから
- How: どんなインタラクションが起こるのか？
- 言い換えが浅い
• It will support formation of Social Capital, which normally handled by non-artifact ways. On crossing points, those who are living different area come across. Media….will make negative mood of such a place to positive..
•Urban media lighting should be a part of public service which government should provide (add to ‘what’)
•(1パラグラフにして、博士メーリングリストにながすのが、宿題）
•プロポーザルでは結論がでそうなフレームが示せればよい。Thesisが価値を示せること。